A rose blooms
While pink dawn lights up
Their heart
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Such GORGEOUS imagery – the rose, the pink dawn, the lighting of their hearts. Beautiful, Sumana.
What a touching thought you have expressed. Beautiful rose.
AND the heart is the world, the rose, the one in all of us. I feel it.
Altogether exquisite!
The last line truly tie it together
That’s such a stellar image!
How much can be conveyed in so few words – this poem blooms Sumana
Simply beautiful and touching.
Seeing a rose fills me with love and your beautiful poem caps it off for me! Just lovely Sumana!
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous ❤
Beautiful
Perfect haiku, Sumana. I can see the rose opening, its petals touched by the first kisses of the sun as their hearts are brightened and warmed by the same light. Just wonderful.
Lustrous! Beautiful imagery!
what a beautiful composition of words that add up to love. Now my heart is warm.
An exquisite haiku – tender and evocative.
That second line I really like… the pink dawn. Very nice.
What a sweet thought…my Daddy’s favorite flower.
Beautiful image, beautiful words, Thank you,
Elizabeth
https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/06/04/rear-view-mirror/
Well constructed Sumana!
This is nice. 🙂
What a sweet haiku, just like you!
a pink dawn ….beautiful image…bkm