
Courtesy: A Dash Of Sunny
Courtesy: A Dash Of Sunny
Life beyond Barriers
mapping the nest
poetry... mostly...
Wake Up!
Life beyond Barriers
mapping the nest
poetry... mostly...
Wake Up!
A word is worth a thousand pictures
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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words. ~Robert Frost
~ Poetry and Rhyme by Sumyanna -
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Your words may be playmates but mine tease and hide from me then a big bully will insist on playing until I am no longer in control of what I write! Yours sound so good I will swap mine for yours! This poem gave me a great laugh Sumana, thank you!
Oh my goodness ❤ this is such a gorgeous write, Sumana 😀 I never realized until now after reading your poem that rest can also be described as doing something we love 😀 Especially adore "My every waking moment is filled with Words in various forms,hues, attires." Beautifully penned.
Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Words are a great comfort.
What an intricate view of ‘rest,’ Sumana.I like the idea of caring for them, even the thunderous ones, because soon the rain will come to cool them down. Indeed I think of words as playmates too. They are great company & enrich one’s life!
When you are with someone you love
all your time is restful and bliss
Very true Sumana! Time passed by and the rest accorded was deserving of one’s struggle to have a good life
Hank
This made me feel that rest can sometimes come in doing things we enjoy – deep inside – ballerinas look effortless, smooth but in some ways it’s a contradiction to the work their body is undertaking..whereas peace and rest of mind seems to be a synchronicity of sorts..i can also empathise with the lack of rest in sleep…when we are not busy the things that make us restless all too easily return..
The last four lines are pure truth and loving wisdom. When we spend our time with those we love (and who love us back), even work rests our soul. This is wonderful, Sumana.
My words delight AND torment me…
So very true! The close here is wonderful!
squabbling in the grotto
of my brain
tell me my whereabouts… that is beautifully put!
Words, the bestest of playmates!
Indeed! Such a lovely tapestry woven!
A beautiful rendition of the thing we should all recognise 😀 XXX
My words are sometimes so fleeting but indeed wonderful playmates.
Anna :o]
I think we all love our playmates the words… they are indeed sometimes fleeting and sometimes hard… but I cannot imagine being without them
What bliss! Such a lovely piece. 🙂
-HA
Good thoughts!
Words indeed are our friends and being with them brings peace and rest….and as you say bliss! Lovely thoughts!
I love the words “squabbling in the grotto of my brain”….and the ones that are “my love”. Love this poem, Sumana!
This is such a beautiful, thoughtful poem, and I love how words really are like loved ones. They come with all the chaos and joy of love and friendship.
This is my favorite section:
“Not all are art forms.
The garrulous of them
squabbling in the grotto
of my brain
tell me my whereabouts.”
Beautiful !!!! ❤
Lovely, emotive, wise and tender – the close on this piece is so moving … a simple truth in an, often times, chaotic world.
So wonderful that you are in love with words. And they bring you rest. Your words always feel to me like a little vacation.
Oh, the love of words, a life-long journey, to worlds we’d never see without them,
Elizabeth
https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/06/19/would-be-king/
Beautifully written, ode to the words that encourage, are fearful, or creative and sometimes soothing.
Wow, Sumana! The last lines, ‘When you are with someone you love all your time is restful and bliss.’ precious and encouraging. A very fine piece, indeed.
Great thoughtful response!
You are a lover of words, and it is obvious that words love you as well.
Quiet bodies sometimes have terribly active minds behind them! I had a bit of a chuckle at your description of more inelegant thoughts happening and keeping track of them anyway.
Let you be filled words and more words and more words…for it brings bliss….
“to see the inner countenance” … how true …how beautifully said!!