Poem to One
Who is turning
This bright blue
candle of a day
with the flame of
the soft rosy sun
I am sending you
to celebrate from
a far away shore.
Also gifting you
a cake of a poem
baked with very
simple words of
love, my friend.
will slowly draw
its curtain today
night will be lit up
with all the starry
wishes of the
loved ones; my
note also joins
all twinkling voice
to deeply pray
for many more
of the lovely day.
Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif ~ Birthday(s) @ Poets United
15 thoughts on “A Birthday Poem”
Wow…Loved the creativity …the image of candle and loving words to lit it up…a gift indeed!
This is the best birthday greeting ever, all of nature in your words.
Aah Sumana, a cake of a poem indeed!
Love is the gift that counts – no matter the day..the best wish and the very best gift..
Very inventive! What a joy it is to belong to such a loving and caring community.
A very lovely birthday poem for Susan….beautiful!
Very sweet thoughts dear!
Such a beautiful poem – lovely wishes, decorated with a sprinkle of stardust.
Simple words are the most delicious of all!
Ah, I second this wish, Sumana! A very thoughtful wish.
Lovely wishes …immensely pleased with the freshness of this poem, Sumana! Adding truckloads of joy and happiness for your friend!
A beautiful birthday card, Sumana
Such a lovely thought!!
Oh my goodness…this has me swooning, sighing–SO Beautiful!!!