I left my job
to think of her smile
and other things in words.
She blooms
like the lone evening star
lambent, far
in my inner twilight sky.
Posting for 5th year celebration of dVerse where Bjorn hosts ~ Part 4, Catching up with Samuel Peralta
This is soo beautiful and poignant both at the same time..!! ❤
This is so bittersweet… to feel a presence in such absence.
Those we love shine for us wherever we are. Beautifully written Sumana.
She will forever bloom and twinkle in that twilight sky. A lovely share Sumana. Thanks for joining us~
Love is the most powerful fuel… She shines all the way here.
Such a beautiful remembrance of your list loved one.
This is so bittersweet. The strength of the love squaring off against the distance of the sky.
Beautiful! 🙂
it is an interesting contrast of near and far in this…quitting your job to be near, and yet she blooms farther away.
Beautiful. 🙂
A whole life story in these few words.
A dream while awake that leaves a smile others can only guess about 😀 XXX
Love can blossom as one waits.
Hank
That last sentence is so compelling, Sumana…she’s far but close in your inner twilight sky…beautiful.
“…lambent, far in my inner twilight sky”.
So comforting to know she is there like a warm glow.
This is lovely, so near and yet so far 🙂
I do like the thought of a loved one becoming like a star – always there shining in the darkness. Lovely poem.
Just so lovely and bittersweet!