Courtesy: Google Image
Their eyes tell me
You would have been complete
But for that missing piece
Posted for Sumana’s Midweek Motif ~ Space @ Poets United
Empty Space
Courtesy: Google Image
Posted for Sumana’s Midweek Motif ~ Space @ Poets United
Life beyond Barriers
mapping the nest
poetry... mostly...
Wake Up!
Life beyond Barriers
mapping the nest
poetry... mostly...
Wake Up!
A word is worth a thousand pictures
Tagore Songs in Translation
I like birds
Wet Ink - Don't Smudge
Scribbling Spiritual Sand...
Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words. ~Robert Frost
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Those eyes seem judgemental… a strong piece Sumana.
Me, They, you. This poem points in all directions. Wordlessly. How bound up we are in relationship, how similar our missing parts. That’s how we know truth from fiction.
The hardest words in the world to hear are “would have been.”
An expression of pain. Thought provoking.
Good one, with a perfect picture 🙂
Word picture, well drawn!
This small poem has great impact, Sumana. Well done.
Wow. This has meaning that reverberates. Excellent writing Sumana. I hear your heart in this.
Such power even in the brevity of your verse Sumana 🙂 Beautifully done!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
A single missing piece is enough to disfigure the perfection….strong words…:-)
Such a small thing, NOT!
So many perspectives offered here. Well done.
None of us are perfect. Acceptance of each others faults is a start but the willingness to change is essential.
I think this describes many of us really….we all have at least one missing piece!
i believe we all have a missing piece…it’s all in the way we choose to fill it.
lovely translation of Tagore.
And the three liners more vocal than any verbiage.
Often the mistaken belief that things are all right but not! Happens lots of times!
Hank
Hmmm, perhaps that vital last missing piece which prevents completion makes for a continuing fascination, wonder and enchantment.