My dreams are not
anti art
but rather a bit Dadaistic
in tone-
cautiously sculptured
in collages
of cut up imagined memory
by an inner ‘I’-
making me ride a hobby horse
and wander
from one cube of darkness
to another
in false reality.
Posted for dVerse Quadrille #38 ~ Dream hosted by De
I really love the hobby horse here… have you heard about the hobby horse movement in Finland?
No, of course not. Just googled it. And now I’m looking at the poem with a bit different angle. Thank you Bjorn.
I love the way the form of your piece mirrors its subject, words sliced in a rhythmic fashion. Wonderful.
‘from one cube of darkness to another’ absolutely great line in a gem of a poem
I do love how you describe your dreams – “from one cube of darkness to another” – it feels like that exactly!
Interesting description of dreams as cubes of false reality we enter and leave.
Love the Dadaistic dreams and the lines:
‘…wander
from one cube of darkness
to another
in false reality’.
Some dreams are false reality; some take us back to reality of long ago. Amazing where our minds go when we’re asleep!
I’m with Welshstream here. Lovely words!
Anna :o]
This is a surreal response with: Dadaistic
in tone- Love this line too:wander
from one cube of darkness
to another
and wander / from one cube of darkness / to another – great!
My dreams are that way too; sometimes wandering from one subject to another. I like the, “and wander
from one cube of darkness to another in false reality.” Like you can’t really tell if the dream has ended or not
Ooooo, I love the “inner I.” Perfect for dreaming!
Ooh.. wandering from a cube of darkness to another false reality… this makes me want to try it once. Great write, Sumana. ❤
such thought-full dreaming here Sumana – your imagery has taken on some gorgeous new patterns
A lovely poem…I would like to see the collages you create. It is an interesting question if reality is true?
A beautiful Quadrille, I love the Dadaistic tone :o) xxx
Interesting.
Such deep meaning in all those words!
This poem puts interesting images in my head. 🙂
A creative mind works/wanders while sleeping too 😉
powerful beginning and ending! 🙂