
Courtesy: Poets United
I sit
with a mute sea
in my heart
to be reunited
with you
I walk
on the path
of grief
only to rest
at your door
I craft now
with time-crystal
a chandelier
to be hung
on our reunion day
Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif ~ Reunion @ Poets United
time-crystal… wow… very poignant, the grief is palpable.
Oh grief! Oh hope! That life is spent in crafting a center of Light! I love this.
A longing, beautifully expressed.
A beautifully crafted poem. Thank you for sharing it.
I felt every word of this beautiful poem, my friend.
As always, you captivate with your choice of words. Beautiful indeed. Your craft and your brain.
This touches my heart deeply. I can feel your grief expressed in this beautiful poem.
What a deep breath taking poem
You have such a gift of using simple language and brevity to touch the heart deeply.
Your words touched me deeply.
Sigh! Grief is one of those emotions that have a life of their own. It carries every feeling within it …Oh how beautifully done, Sumana! My heart goes out to you… May peace and happiness surround you always. 🙂 Hugz…
May this reunion happen, just as you wish! Blessings to you, Sumana.
The chandelier will be hung, of that I am certain. What a hope-filled ending!
The point being she is with you and will always be with you now and in the hereafter in some form which we do not understand ..because of our human limitation. Allow her to shine her love, light and warmth on your darkness. I believe she will help in showing you the way to some peace . This is a very hard time in your life . At some point it will become more bearable. You are very brave.Hang in there !
I love the metaphorical chandelier of crystal — a perfect dream of the treasure of meeting again.
‘time-crystal’ – a lovely sounding phrase. I look in it, and see reunion of two who care for each other a great deal. Moving piece, Sumana.