An Evening Ritual (A Shardorma)



a single

star in darkling sky

through the pane

peeps inside

to see how I wave a lamp

before the deities




Posted for Micropoetry Month: Nov 2017 #16 hosted by Thotpurge


7 thoughts on “An Evening Ritual (A Shardorma)

  1. NIce. I read pane as pain, with a double meaning.
    In pain, we can retreat inside ourselves, which can be a dark place. I imagine the writer inside and in desperate prayer when the light of a single star pierces the darkness.

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