I watch the mother crow
feed its babies (one even might be a cuckoo kid, who knows),
jostling in a nest (if you could call that a nest-
with all those whatever prodding out,
hmmm….totally unlovely home décor-
I once discovered a spoon in a broken crow-nest,
thief-y bird!!)
she is very much plain, you know
to the extent of unsightly-
sporting grey, white and black
feathers-
What’s there to watch?
Yet
isn’t it godly to see love pouring out
in the shape of a worm or whatever
(purely putrid to us)
tenderly put
into a trembling pink tunnel
that spirals down
where lives perpetual hunger-
from a mother
whatever color she has
whatever shape
whatever class?
Posted for Susan’s Midweek Motif Colour / Color @ Poets United
Yes, yes, godly and starkly beautiful in its tenderness. Wow. Such a surprising poem that takes the entire world into its embrace.
Wonderful read Sumana… colour DOES NOT matter…in any creature…wish the world would realise that!
Life in all its forms is colorful, as you demonstrate in the worms and crows and maybe cuckoos that inhabit this poem.
Yes!!! I love this.
Maybe colours are just feelings; beautiful or sad
Happy Wednesday
Much🌼love
I love, love, love that you picked crows! I watch them a lot on my bike rides they’re very smart and vocal to each other. I’m never lucky enough to see nests, maybe this spring? They love Cheetos (in case you want to feed them.) What a great analogy.
Oh yes! A miracle in motion😊
I love this look at a humble mother, trying to raise her chicks in a precarious nest. The search for food to feed her young every mother on earth knows so well.
A tender observation, SumanaI
You have written a poem about the colour of maternal love. Lovely.
And what is the color of a mother’s love? maybe the color of a worm. This is a wonderful poem. Love doesn’t know color, does it?
Sadly humanity in its inhumanity doesn’t see the world that way. There is beauty in every living creature as those that watch in wonder and respect some creature from the deep or the parade of ants in military style working as one so that the nest can survive and prosper, or indeed a mother crow making do as best she can reminding me of harder times and my own mother making do with odds and ends as well to feed us kids and keep us safe.
Oh yes,. absolutely!
‘a trembling pink tunnel’ – I love that image!