She gave me her
Sunset smile-
And my heart became numb
Bleeding darkness-
Since then
My words putting on
Crepuscular robe
Tilt towards night-
Posted for my prompt ~ Sunset @ Poets United Midweek Motif
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sumanar/lekha 
Its really heartbreaking, losing a precious loved one
Happy Wednesday Sumana
much love…
Snap as they say when our topic matches. Mine just wrote itself. Muses are funny assistants aren’t they?
I’ve received more than one of those sunset smiles in my lifetime, so I know, I know…
heartbreaking….too too sad….how do any of us survive this grief?
Yes, the sunset smile resonates with me, and so comes the twilight as it fades. Such a moving image of mourning! I, too, took my metaphor into the dark.
Sunset smiles, that’s beautiful, and resonates with me also.
Yes, her sunset smile heralded a long, dark night. Sigh. So beautiful, my friend.
Losing our loved on is so hard, so heartbreaking. The sunset smile really touches me.
Sigh…beautiful.
Oh, that sunset smile and the words tilting towards the night are beautiful phrases, giving depth to this loss and its emotion. Such a hard thing to realize in its entirety.
-HA
that is so beautiful and sad and full of grief…
Beautiful Sumana.
Beautiful and touching, Sumana. A sunset smile stays with you forever.
kaykuala
Sunset smiles leading on to the twilight zone. Good grief Sumana!.( crepuscular – learned a new word today Ma’am!)
Hank
Oooohhh…love it. ‘Bleeding Darkness’
Beautiful, Sumana. I love the way you start with a ‘Sunset smile’, bleed darkness and then#
‘…words putting on
Crepuscular robe
Tilt towards night’.
A “sunset smile…” Just beautiful, Sumana!