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This poem is a large fig tree,
a witness to the struggles
of a seeker, smoldering within-
whose body, like the last autumn leaf
brown, emaciated, was about to drop off-
the tree could do nothing save being a shelter,
a prayer for this man ablaze in renunciation-
This poem is a Bodhi tree
This poem is an earthen bowl of payasam*
in the hands of a village maid
who sang a song of the ‘middle-path’
and offered the seeker the delicacy
which the ascetic accepted-
sun and moon rose and set
no manna ever came his way again-
this poem is Sujata’s bowl of sweet-
This poem is a story of enlightenment
of a prince in his thirties
who wished to conquer desire, disease and death-
he had his ‘rafter broken’,
his ‘ridge pole destroyed’-
his ‘mind came to the end of craving’-
he became Peace himself and a Buddha-
this poem is Man’s enlightenment
this poem is a sacred tree that saw a seeker transcend
this poem is a bowl of heavenly sweet that led a seeker
this poem is enlightenment a seeker leaves home for
*milk-rice pudding
The poem is written in Boomerang Metaphor (invented by Hannah Gosselin)
Posted for Poetry Pantry #435 @ Poets United
Beautifully done Sumana… didn’t feel constrained by the form at all… this genre of poems from you always works so wonderfully!
this poem flows along ‘The Path’ – beautifully done Sumana – the last triplet is a mantra
Beautifully told. I love the Boomerang Metaphor; such a useful form. And I love what you have done with it here.
This is gorgeously written, Sumana! ❤ I love this part: “this poem is a bowl of heavenly sweet that led a seeker.” 😊
This poem is beautiful, Sumana. Each seeker is looking for that enlightenment, and it is not an easy journey. This poem is an inspiration!
Each statement, each stanza, felt like it was opening up further.
I was so happy to see Hannah’s form used so beautifully, Sumana. It is a favourite form of mine and my next prompt at Toads will re-introduce it. I love the story you tell here, the striving, the bowl of sweet, the Bodhi tree and enlightenment. SO beautiful!
Poems can be so many things, depending in large part on the receptivity and imagination of the reader. I especially like the idea of a poem being a bowl that holds sweetness. I imagine that sweetness counteracting all the bitterness in the world.
Beautifully written, loved it.
Wow. Such is the journey, such is the enlightenment. It is the earth, each every person, Buddha, Jesus. Yet here it seems to be holding its breath.
How wonderfully you’ve perceived the spirit of the poem!
This poem is transcendent!
I love that the poem is a tree!! Lovely poem.
I believe this poem did transcend as a seeker there is knowledge in all things.
This poem grows… and shows what it gathered in the process.
Wonderful!
May you be well, happy, and peaceful.
Love it! Beautiful words! And what an intriguing, mesmeric form!
Lovely poem. The boomerang methapor is a form i like very much. Your poem does justice to this form. Happy you dropped by my sumie Su nday
Much☺love