I had a great fall
down those autumn eyes
and withered-
Posted for Sunday Muse #152 hosted by Shay
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Life beyond Barriers
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poetry... mostly...
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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words. ~Robert Frost
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I’m so glad to read your work again!
Eleven words that speak volumes …… sigh!
Your brief words say it all, and say it well!
Well done!
–Shay
Oh, so perfect! I made that fall a time or two and withered. But thankfully not for long. Such a perfect response to the picture.
Oh, man. Yes. This is stunning.
This is absolutely splendid Sumana!!
Well done: fall and autumn word play in your haiku.
Happy Sunday. Stay Safe.
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much love…
Wow! The compression catches an entire story.
Nice, Sumana, and good news. I was ready for a Humpty to take place, but withered doesn’t destroy and is permanent also. Better for your Poem than cousin “wilted”,
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Beautiful!
Oh, I love this short emotive says a thousand things in such few words poem.