This is my childhood
where I live-
it’s fairly livable
because you have a father
who is the Botanical Garden’s Banyan
always giving you shade-
because you have a mother
who is home,
sweet home to you-
you have a little brother to play with-
you also have a storytelling grandpa
and a pickle expert grandma-
the moon looks like a moon
not like a knight’s buckler-
the hawk-cuckoo sounds like a bird
not like a siren-
and we witness with big open eyes
the birth of a nation;
East Pakistan becoming
Bangladesh-
a Tagore song
becoming their national anthem-
isn’t this world pretty?
I wish to float in this beautiful bubble
of a childhood forever
I hope time will never prick it
sharply-
That tree is magnificent, Sumana. This childhood indeed is blessed and full of wonders. I wish every child had such a childhood. Sigh. A really beautiful poem. I love the story telling grandpa and the pickle expert grandma. Smiles.
I really enjoyed getting a glimpse of your childhood, Sumana. Your grandparents sound wonderful. It really is nice sometime to look back at these wonderful times, which now seem so much like a dream. Such a pretty and beautiful world! (And that is an amazing Banyan tree!)
“I wish to float in this beautiful bubble
of a childhood forever” Ahhhh! May it live within you as well as outside you, dear poet, in the land blessed by Tagore’s song. What a childhood!
Though it wasn’t that long ago… still feels like a whole different era.. now trapped in people’s memories… you’ve evoked a very different vibe in this lovely poem.
A happy childhood is probably the most important thing to get you through life….Rall
I really enjoyed your child’s wish, Sumana, especially because it’s in a place I’ve never been and will never visit. But I would love to see a Banyan tree. I appreciated my storytelling grandpa too. Yes, I always wished to float in my childhood bubble, but sadly it was pricked by time.
As always an absolutely beautiful, and elegant poem… ah but we could live floating in that buble and never have it pricked.
Beautiful words and a sentiment that is so true, if only we could hold back relentless time. Great work.
Sumana,
A beautiful world of childhood innocence captured in your poem…Lovely as seen through a child’s eye.
It is nice to reflect back to those days..
This poem really carried me to another time and place. The feelings are expressed with such immediacy I almost felt they were mine.
Such a beautiful poem. I didn’t grow up in a beautiful bubble. I wish I had.